wmmillsEVGATech_AlanTAlan Genius - Check Up https://soundcloud.com/the-alan-genius/check-up Written, arranged, performed, produced and mixed by me Good for you Alan! Do you play any instruments? Anyway, my honest opinion?!? Well, it is def mixed/arranged pretty well and sounds like maybe a tick or two below commercial quality, but I don't think your everyday listener would notice much. The song itself is ok, theres not really anything too hooky or memorable about the melody and pretty much sounds like any other radio song from this genre. You def get points for doing your own singing though cause I hate singing myself. Maybe you could put a band together of like minded guys, or girls, and bounce ideas off each other and improve the songs some??!? To be fair, full disclosure, I am a bassist, although I can play other instruments too, was in a bunch of bands, live gigs, studio work etc... and really I don't like r&b at all but im open minded enough to listen to anything and appreciate the work. Also, my family says im a "music snob" cause I have a bad habit of picking songs apart, looking for mistakes etc... so def take my critique with a grain of salt. I def commend you for your hard work though.
EVGATech_AlanTAlan Genius - Check Up https://soundcloud.com/the-alan-genius/check-up Written, arranged, performed, produced and mixed by me